Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR

1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.

WWW:

slow mo

POV shots

Grainy effect

split screen

use of mirror

good performance

use of makeup

good branding

concept

timing

EBI:

lighting

other location

found image

grammar in lyrics

2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work.

WWW: editing

WWW: shots and performance

WWW: entire video

EBI: found image

EBI: the 6/7 seconds at start

3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?

I think that it fits the brief and the original idea but I think that the lighting should be brighter in some scenes and that some of the shots I wanted to use originally I didn't film.

4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?

I know to change the found images and to film a lot more shots if I am using a fast song

5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything about your actual coursework video plan? This could include your concept, cast/actors or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork or editing.

I am going to change the concept of the first tiktok video, It will still be fan made but will be more focused on the fan and their speculation about a new album/song coming out.