Ignite presentation learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

very well presented slides

fan edit - great idea

good use of bullet points 

CLAMPS

Butler and Mulvey

audience pleasure

good terminology

intertextionality - parody

EBI:

timing

expression

• Research 5/5 
• Coursework concept 5/5
• Language  5/5
• Representations  4/5
• Audience and Industry  5/5
• Presentation delivery 4/5
• overall 28/30

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW: I researched well and had good use of media language and my slides were well presented

EBI: Revise Judith Butler and how to apply her theories and try not to still be speaking when the slide moves 

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

My presentation lays out the concept of my three TikTok's very clearly and it fits the brief fully, however I may need to change the band name. The statement of intent does need to be updated to include more details about my billboard and to apply theories to my three TikTok's in a more precise way. It is achievable to film with the resources I have available and a lot of the props can be easily made or borrowed. My presentation explained audience theories very well and audience pleasures so I will add that to my statement of intent and use more key terminology throughout the statement of intent. Overall my PowerPoint clearly explains my ideas and how my coursework fits the brief but I will have to rewrite my statement of intent to include all of the things of my PowerPoint.