Film & TV Language: Cinematography feedback and learner response

 1) Type up your feedback/comments from your teacher.

excellent cinematography

great concept 

excellent mise en scene

range of shots

good labelling and title

freeze frames

humorous 

camera movements

good performances

break up the medium shots with another type of shot 

2) Type up your feedback from fellow students.

good shots 

good idea

creative

good narrative

costumes

labels 

mix up the camera shots

3) Now reflect on your work and write your own summary of the comments and feedback you have received. Write three WWWs and three EBIs.

WWW

the framing

the range of shots

the creativity

EBI

the order of the shots

the sound

lighting

4) Learner response: think about what you learned about cinematography making the video and also watching others. What will you do differently when you start the coursework in the summer? What tips or tricks have you learned from others that you can use next time? Are there any specific aspects of camerawork that you need to revise or practice?

I think that the range of shots is good but I think that I need to space them out and I think that the sound is too low or too loud in some clips. I think there could be more editing and for the coursework I will plan out the shots before filming and make sure that I have enough time to include a plot.